Thursday, January 14, 2010

Flamenco Skirts Would You Care To Comment On A Short Poem?

Would you care to comment on a short poem? - flamenco skirts

Windy Morning
CS Scotkin


Hibiscus
Scarlet apron
dance flirt
Flamenco rhythms;
Staccato singing of the wind.

6 comments:

lul said...

I can say.
I see dance scarlet hibiscus. I see a flamenco dancer and a skirt made of red hibiscus, dance.
Hibiscus Does your garden?

lul said...

I can say.
I see dance scarlet hibiscus. I see a flamenco dancer and a skirt made of red hibiscus, dance.
Hibiscus Does your garden?

lul said...

I can say.
I see dance scarlet hibiscus. I see a flamenco dancer and a skirt made of red hibiscus, dance.
Hibiscus Does your garden?

lul said...

I can say.
I see dance scarlet hibiscus. I see a flamenco dancer and a skirt made of red hibiscus, dance.
Hibiscus Does your garden?

Dondi said...

The word staccato remember the clear sound of a gun. What kind of wind, that we are here?

When the poem you just need a little wind from commenting.

Grannyji... said...

I see - that is a picture !.... change not to read opinions of others before publication, I send Dahha and I are great minds - we think alike!

Snowdrops
Small Screen
timid a glance
modest dress
welcome spring

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